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Answer to Prayer by ~Bananah-Lou:iconBananah-Lou:



Where are you?
I shout to the storm
Where are you?
Isnt this what you want?
Me to ask you first
Isnt this what you ask of me?
So when I do
Where are you?

No vision
No inspiration
No angel
No words
No voice
No answer
Nothing

But then a memory
A half forgotten dream
from long ago
The answer hidden in the past
Why did I doubt?
Why did I question?
I should have always known
that you would send
My answer to prayer.
©2008-2009 ~Bananah-Lou
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Author's Comments

Well I don't like this poem as much as I did last night when I wrote it... but I said I would put it up so here it is. Its not as powerful as I would have liked... maybe I'll write another one some time.

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:iconnytram12:
hmm yeah it does lack a little impact i guess. u just need practice =p

--
Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters

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:iconbananah-lou:
How do you think I could improve it?

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~Bananah Lou~
:iconnytram12:
i really don't know...

sometimes only the author can tell wts needed

--
Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters

Want to get more feedback on your prose or poetry? ---> *Writers-Club
:iconledannen:
hmmm i think the last line needs changing to "The answer to my prayer"

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